Also ich brauche Hilde bei meiner Englisch-Story.
Wie müssen nämlich eine Geistergeschichte oder dergleichen schreiben und diese dann mit einem Partner vortragen. Ich habe die Geschichte heute einmal VERSUCHT
aufzuschreiben. Jedoch habe ich bestimmt sehr viele Fehler gemacht. Es wäre echt nett, wenn sich jemand meine Geschichte durchlesen würde und dann auch verbessern könnte.
Bitte nicht erschrecken
Bin nicht so gut in Englisch!
One evening in New Yok, Stephanie and her best friend Nicole made theirself ready for going out. It was Friday the thirteenth.
Suddenly the screw of the mirror got lose, the mirror fell on the floor and broke into pieces.
Stephanie was very sad because the mirror was a present from her grandmother. She remembered wg^hat the grandmmother said: If the mirror ever brake, and if she don’t put the pieces away, she will have 7 years bad luck, but when she but the the pieces directly away, then she will have only 7 hours bad luck.
Stephanie wasn’t very
superstitious, but she anyway but the pieces away.
“What a pity!“, said Nicole. „Yes…it’s a pity. But whatever….let’s go!“, answered Stephanie.
20 minutes later, they were at the coffee-shop and drank a coffee. Stephanie was very blundering and she distribute the coffee. „Oh no. Can you please give me a napkin, Nicole?“
After they drank their coffee, Stephanie went home. But the street was very sippery and suddenly she slided with the car. But she had luck; she just slieded close on a tree cover with the car. The car had just a little scratch. Stephanie was appales, but after a few minutes she drove slow home.
Finally she parked her car in the carpark. She was very hungry after this day, so she runed up stairs to her appartment, but at the last stage,she stumble over her own feet and fell down the stairs. She groanes up, besause it’s hurts really bad, but fortunately she didn’t brake anything. Slowley she gets up and walk up stairs, to unlock the door. „Oh no…..what’s wrong with me today!?!“, said Stephanie wehn she saw that she forgot her key at the coffee shop. So she drove back to the coffe shop to get her key.
One hour later she cooked for herself. She was still very hungry. „Ouch!!!“, screames Stephanie. She cut herself with the knife. „What a curious day!“
After eating, she wanted to wash the dishes, but suddenly the light turned of. Stephanie was very frightend. She tried to turn the light on, but it dosent worked, thats why she inflamed a candle. She again remebered what her grandmother said about the mirror. „Could that really bet rue?“, asked Stephanie herself. She was really terrified.
She waited one hour, but the light still didn’t work. A few minutes later she suddenly heared weird noises. She sense that someone was in the room. „Hello? Is anbody here?“, asked Stephanie. She was really scared. Suddenly the light turned on and she saw a man in front of her. She screamed really nobody heared her.
The next morning the neighbour of Stephanie found her dead in her appartement.
LG
LostHope