Hallo!
Wir müssen für Englisch eine kurze Geschichte schreiben und ich habe mir nun nach langem überlegen eine Ausgedacht und sie niedergeschrieben.
Ich weiß nun aber leider nicht, ob diese Geschichte wirklich gut ist oder sich in ihr noch total viele Rechtschreib oder Grammatikfehler tummeln...
Ich hoffe ihr habt Spaß beim Lesen der Geschichte
und ich fände es wirklich unglaublich nett, wenn ihr Verbesserungsvorschläge für die Geschichte oder sprachliche Mengel, die ihr entdeckt habt, einfach posten würdet.
Vielen, vielen Dank schon mal im Vorraus und hier kommt sie nun...
The Dreamer - The life of John Adams
John Adams is a normal, happy teenager who lives in a small town near Philadelphia.
His family is very lovely and only his little brother annoys him sometimes.
He is sixteen years old and has short black hair and brown eyes.
His hobbies are football, tennis and athletics.
John is not very interested in school, because for him it is a fact that he`ll be a famous, rich sportsman.
His parents don`t think that this is the right way for their son, but they support him wherever they have the opportunity to do it.
John is very happy with his life, but this all change at just one day.
He comes back from football very late and his only wish is to fall asleep very quick.
But this evening it`s very hard for him to fall asleep, because he isn`t able to stop thinking about the important football match on saturday.
He needs finally two hours to fall asleep and then he has a very weird dream.
He stands in front of the supermarket of their town and the supermarket is burning. Beside him stands Peter their neighbour. Peter is laughing like somebody made a very funny joke.
John is shocked and suddenly he wakes up.
During the breakfast John tells his crazy dream his parents. Then his mother suddenly screams and points at one big article in the newspaper.
The supermarket really burned down last night and the police thinks it was fire raising.
His mother runs to the telephone. John is still shocked.
Then she takes John and drives with him to the police station where she tells the officer that her son is the fire raiser and that he is normally a very good boy.
The police officer talks a very long time with John and nobody seems to believe him that he isn`t the committer but Peter their neighbour.
After endless hours the policeman says that they should call a lawyer, because they`ll need one and that they could go home now.
Johns law suit takes over three months and the adjudgement wasn`t a big surprise for him.
Everybody thinks that he is the committer and he has to do 70 hours social work, because this is his first felony.
Because of this experience John decides that he won`t talk with nobody about one of his dreams again.
And he has a lot of dreams to tell about.
Since this first dream, he has every night about 5 dreams of the future.
John isn`t able to explain his ability, but actually he doesn`t give a damn.
His whole life is improving. He knows simply everything, before it happens. His class tests, all secrets in his life, what people are thinking about him and so on.
And his life turns crazy, since the moment he decides to play lotto.
Now John is 23 years old and is a famous, rich broker.
He still has his special dreams and that`s also the reason why he is so unbelievable successful.
He lives in the biggest villa of Washington DC and his small fortune is 350 million dollar.
A lot of magazines write stories and articles about him and say that he is one of the most powerful man in the world.
John isn`t really able to enjoy his money.
He knows everything and what first sounds like a blessing is becoming more and more a bane for him, because everything in the world is simply boring for him.
He doesn`t really want to get to know new people, because he always knows what they really think about him and he also doesn`t want to attempt something special, because he clearly knows how it will be.
He still keeps his dreams secret and again just one day will change his life.
This day he wakes up shocked. He couldn`t believe that he really dreamed this. He dreamed that today he will die on his way to work in his limousine, because of an accident.
John doesn`t know what to do, but then he has an idea.
He decides that he wont go to work today.
He phones one of his managers and after a short talk his offhanded holydays are planned.
After the breakfast he jumps into his Ferrari and drive to his parents. His parents are the only people in the world who know about his dreams.
But during the drive, he becomes more and more tied and after an hour he has to pause.
He fall asleep and dreamed that his parents will be killed by two burglars, when he`ll visit them.
Suddenly he wakes up again. He doesn`t know what to do, but then he has an idea to visit Frank.
Frank is an old friend from school.
But also this time he has an cruelly dream, before he arrived.
And it goes on and on likes this and after 4 months, he begins to think about to suicide, because for him life doesn`t make sense anymore, but than something unexpected happens again.
At one station of his escape, a little café, one beautiful, young women says him that he has the force about his dreams.
John is confused, but he hasn`t the time to think about this women, because he can`t stay any longer in this café, because otherwise a big bomb would kill everybody who is in this café.
This night John has one of his most scary dreams of his whole life. A tall black man follows him with a big, white sword and tries to kill him.
He runs for his life but after an endless time he gives up and stand still.
Just in this moment the women of the café appears in his dream. She takes his hand and suddenly the man with the sword disappears.
John is totally confused, but than the women says that she has told him that he has the power about his dreams.
John understands what the women wants to say and John doesn`t know why, but suddenly John kiss this women who has just saved his life.
Wir müssen für Englisch eine kurze Geschichte schreiben und ich habe mir nun nach langem überlegen eine Ausgedacht und sie niedergeschrieben.
Ich weiß nun aber leider nicht, ob diese Geschichte wirklich gut ist oder sich in ihr noch total viele Rechtschreib oder Grammatikfehler tummeln...
Ich hoffe ihr habt Spaß beim Lesen der Geschichte
und ich fände es wirklich unglaublich nett, wenn ihr Verbesserungsvorschläge für die Geschichte oder sprachliche Mengel, die ihr entdeckt habt, einfach posten würdet.Vielen, vielen Dank schon mal im Vorraus und hier kommt sie nun...
The Dreamer - The life of John Adams
John Adams is a normal, happy teenager who lives in a small town near Philadelphia.
His family is very lovely and only his little brother annoys him sometimes.
He is sixteen years old and has short black hair and brown eyes.
His hobbies are football, tennis and athletics.
John is not very interested in school, because for him it is a fact that he`ll be a famous, rich sportsman.
His parents don`t think that this is the right way for their son, but they support him wherever they have the opportunity to do it.
John is very happy with his life, but this all change at just one day.
He comes back from football very late and his only wish is to fall asleep very quick.
But this evening it`s very hard for him to fall asleep, because he isn`t able to stop thinking about the important football match on saturday.
He needs finally two hours to fall asleep and then he has a very weird dream.
He stands in front of the supermarket of their town and the supermarket is burning. Beside him stands Peter their neighbour. Peter is laughing like somebody made a very funny joke.
John is shocked and suddenly he wakes up.
During the breakfast John tells his crazy dream his parents. Then his mother suddenly screams and points at one big article in the newspaper.
The supermarket really burned down last night and the police thinks it was fire raising.
His mother runs to the telephone. John is still shocked.
Then she takes John and drives with him to the police station where she tells the officer that her son is the fire raiser and that he is normally a very good boy.
The police officer talks a very long time with John and nobody seems to believe him that he isn`t the committer but Peter their neighbour.
After endless hours the policeman says that they should call a lawyer, because they`ll need one and that they could go home now.
Johns law suit takes over three months and the adjudgement wasn`t a big surprise for him.
Everybody thinks that he is the committer and he has to do 70 hours social work, because this is his first felony.
Because of this experience John decides that he won`t talk with nobody about one of his dreams again.
And he has a lot of dreams to tell about.
Since this first dream, he has every night about 5 dreams of the future.
John isn`t able to explain his ability, but actually he doesn`t give a damn.
His whole life is improving. He knows simply everything, before it happens. His class tests, all secrets in his life, what people are thinking about him and so on.
And his life turns crazy, since the moment he decides to play lotto.
Now John is 23 years old and is a famous, rich broker.
He still has his special dreams and that`s also the reason why he is so unbelievable successful.
He lives in the biggest villa of Washington DC and his small fortune is 350 million dollar.
A lot of magazines write stories and articles about him and say that he is one of the most powerful man in the world.
John isn`t really able to enjoy his money.
He knows everything and what first sounds like a blessing is becoming more and more a bane for him, because everything in the world is simply boring for him.
He doesn`t really want to get to know new people, because he always knows what they really think about him and he also doesn`t want to attempt something special, because he clearly knows how it will be.
He still keeps his dreams secret and again just one day will change his life.
This day he wakes up shocked. He couldn`t believe that he really dreamed this. He dreamed that today he will die on his way to work in his limousine, because of an accident.
John doesn`t know what to do, but then he has an idea.
He decides that he wont go to work today.
He phones one of his managers and after a short talk his offhanded holydays are planned.
After the breakfast he jumps into his Ferrari and drive to his parents. His parents are the only people in the world who know about his dreams.
But during the drive, he becomes more and more tied and after an hour he has to pause.
He fall asleep and dreamed that his parents will be killed by two burglars, when he`ll visit them.
Suddenly he wakes up again. He doesn`t know what to do, but then he has an idea to visit Frank.
Frank is an old friend from school.
But also this time he has an cruelly dream, before he arrived.
And it goes on and on likes this and after 4 months, he begins to think about to suicide, because for him life doesn`t make sense anymore, but than something unexpected happens again.
At one station of his escape, a little café, one beautiful, young women says him that he has the force about his dreams.
John is confused, but he hasn`t the time to think about this women, because he can`t stay any longer in this café, because otherwise a big bomb would kill everybody who is in this café.
This night John has one of his most scary dreams of his whole life. A tall black man follows him with a big, white sword and tries to kill him.
He runs for his life but after an endless time he gives up and stand still.
Just in this moment the women of the café appears in his dream. She takes his hand and suddenly the man with the sword disappears.
John is totally confused, but than the women says that she has told him that he has the power about his dreams.
John understands what the women wants to say and John doesn`t know why, but suddenly John kiss this women who has just saved his life.
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